Post by Kassa on Aug 23, 2008 17:00:05 GMT -6
Kassa's Notes: Hey, Axl. =3 It was in the wrong place, but dont worry, its no big deal. I guess I wasn't very specific on where it goes, now that I look, and I understand how you could get confused. ^^ I took out the blue fire, simply because your character has quite a few special abilities as it is. I was picky on allowing the spirit maniupulation, but, I decided to allow it. I think we may be able to use your character in the plot later on. And I like him, and since you've got a pretty good profile, well, I couldn't make myself say no. =3 Anyways, otherwise, it looks good. And your accepted. Just be careful not to godmod with your character, I know it would be easy to with his abilities, but its a big pet peeve of mine, so just be careful of that. ^^ Welcome!
Name: Axl Ro-Zu
Age: 18
Nation of Origin: Fire Nation
Gender: Male
Bender? Yes. A novice firebender guided by an ancient fire-spirit.
Group: none
Apperance:
Slim athletic build, with a stance that suggests a confident warrior. A small flame spirit is ever-present on his left shoulder, his life long companion, said to be the soul of an ancient firelord.
He has redish blonde hair, which is a family trait. And also green eyes, another family trait.
Personality:Little is known of Axl's personality, mainly due to his reclusive lifestyle.
History: Axl grew up like any other fire bender in his village, forced to train his bending every day at a school focused on fire bending. Axl never really showed any potential, average attack skill, average defense, and a huge lack of determination.
That was until people started noticing a flame upon his left
shoulder. It seemed to change him, his perspect on life and death, bending and war changed dramatically. He began to excell in his firebending classes. His teachers had no idea how or why he had become such a passionate warrior. But they knew he had changed.
The flame spirit seemed to increase his bending skill, to the point that he rivaled the senior students at school. Afraid he was too dangerous to live among the village, he was banished to a life of exile.
He now wanders from village to village, working as a freelance mercenary.
RP SAMPLE:
[Something i used in a previous avatar RP forum]
Axl stood amidst the ash and burnt down remains of the temple. He had waited at the mountain too long, "father, i could have helped you. Why did you make me stay at the mountain?" He could barely breathe, but at this point his life meant nothing.
With his family gone, and his home, what did he have worth living for?. He fell to his knees and began to cry, "I will avenge you, i promise you all!"
Hours went by, and Axl hadn't budged at all. Ash had started to pile up around his legs, but this did not bother him. Axl looked up one more time, hoping fate would show him what to do next. And, by fate or maybe pure luck, a small group of soldiers emerged from one of the less burnt buildings carrying furniture and clothes.
Axl stood up, and kicked a heat wave towards the group, then darted behind a pile of bricks. The attack blew the group of soldiers back several feet, giving Axl another opportunity to attack, while they were down.
Using a huge amount of heat, he launched himself into the air, and as he began to descend, he began to spin. Faster and faster until he made himself into a blue inferno. Axl closed his eyes , and was knocked unconscious upon impact. The explosion killed all but one soldier, who had managed to jump back enough to avoid the full blast. When Axl awoke, the soldier was staring down at him. His arms were already bowned together so there wasn't much he could do about it.
As the guard pulled him up, Axl wondered what was to become of him.
You're going to see the fire lord, he will decide your fate", the soldier said furiously. Axl smiled, and walked cooperatively.
Feelings of sorrow and regret began to plague his mind, he wondered why his own king would order an attack on the temple. As he entered the large room where the king resided, the flame everpresent on his shoulder began to grow, as did Axl's rage.
Special Abilities:
Spirit manipulation: Axl's link with his fire spirit gives him certain supernatural abilities, like communication with the dead.
Axl can use his flame spirit as an alternative to fire bending, moving similar to a water bender to guide the spirit's direction..
HeatWave: Air is heated to to a degree where it is bendable.
Often used as a defensive ability by Axl. Other variations are possible, like using it to launch himself several feet into the air etc..
Lightning: An ability Axl somehow taught himself, most probably influenced by his flame spirit.
Pet profile:
Name: Shouyuo
Race: Salamander(An ancestor to the ancient dragon's)
History: While pursuing a water bender, as part of job he was working on at the time, Axl stumbled across a half dead Salamander. By the looks of it, it had been drenched in water. Axl picke dthe poor critter up and placed him on his shoulder, next to his spirit guide. As Axl continued the pursuit, the small salamnder begant to regain consciousness. Hours passed and the trail Axl had been following lead to a large lake. Steppng back a bit, suspecting a trap, he noticed the small salamander was now fully awake. It's eyes were fixated on a large group of bushes, Axl knew to trust the salamander's heat sensitive vision and knew the water bender was hiding there.
After apprehending the water bender. Axl claimed his bounty, and decided to keep the small salamnder, naming it Shouyou after his deceased father.
Abilities:
Heat sensitive vision: Able to pick up on a persons body temperature, even in the coldest environments.
Flame breath: Shouyou posesses the ability to breath fire, although not enough to kill anyone, it is useful in certain situations. Axl has used Shouyou for infiltrartion missions, utilizing his small size to get inside highly guarded areas, and fire breath for the destruction of government documents.
This could explain Axl's clean record, no criminal status despite several situations with numerous governments.
Name: Axl Ro-Zu
Age: 18
Nation of Origin: Fire Nation
Gender: Male
Bender? Yes. A novice firebender guided by an ancient fire-spirit.
Group: none
Apperance:
Slim athletic build, with a stance that suggests a confident warrior. A small flame spirit is ever-present on his left shoulder, his life long companion, said to be the soul of an ancient firelord.
He has redish blonde hair, which is a family trait. And also green eyes, another family trait.
Personality:Little is known of Axl's personality, mainly due to his reclusive lifestyle.
History: Axl grew up like any other fire bender in his village, forced to train his bending every day at a school focused on fire bending. Axl never really showed any potential, average attack skill, average defense, and a huge lack of determination.
That was until people started noticing a flame upon his left
shoulder. It seemed to change him, his perspect on life and death, bending and war changed dramatically. He began to excell in his firebending classes. His teachers had no idea how or why he had become such a passionate warrior. But they knew he had changed.
The flame spirit seemed to increase his bending skill, to the point that he rivaled the senior students at school. Afraid he was too dangerous to live among the village, he was banished to a life of exile.
He now wanders from village to village, working as a freelance mercenary.
RP SAMPLE:
[Something i used in a previous avatar RP forum]
Axl stood amidst the ash and burnt down remains of the temple. He had waited at the mountain too long, "father, i could have helped you. Why did you make me stay at the mountain?" He could barely breathe, but at this point his life meant nothing.
With his family gone, and his home, what did he have worth living for?. He fell to his knees and began to cry, "I will avenge you, i promise you all!"
Hours went by, and Axl hadn't budged at all. Ash had started to pile up around his legs, but this did not bother him. Axl looked up one more time, hoping fate would show him what to do next. And, by fate or maybe pure luck, a small group of soldiers emerged from one of the less burnt buildings carrying furniture and clothes.
Axl stood up, and kicked a heat wave towards the group, then darted behind a pile of bricks. The attack blew the group of soldiers back several feet, giving Axl another opportunity to attack, while they were down.
Using a huge amount of heat, he launched himself into the air, and as he began to descend, he began to spin. Faster and faster until he made himself into a blue inferno. Axl closed his eyes , and was knocked unconscious upon impact. The explosion killed all but one soldier, who had managed to jump back enough to avoid the full blast. When Axl awoke, the soldier was staring down at him. His arms were already bowned together so there wasn't much he could do about it.
As the guard pulled him up, Axl wondered what was to become of him.
You're going to see the fire lord, he will decide your fate", the soldier said furiously. Axl smiled, and walked cooperatively.
Feelings of sorrow and regret began to plague his mind, he wondered why his own king would order an attack on the temple. As he entered the large room where the king resided, the flame everpresent on his shoulder began to grow, as did Axl's rage.
Special Abilities:
Spirit manipulation: Axl's link with his fire spirit gives him certain supernatural abilities, like communication with the dead.
Axl can use his flame spirit as an alternative to fire bending, moving similar to a water bender to guide the spirit's direction..
HeatWave: Air is heated to to a degree where it is bendable.
Often used as a defensive ability by Axl. Other variations are possible, like using it to launch himself several feet into the air etc..
Lightning: An ability Axl somehow taught himself, most probably influenced by his flame spirit.
Pet profile:
Name: Shouyuo
Race: Salamander(An ancestor to the ancient dragon's)
History: While pursuing a water bender, as part of job he was working on at the time, Axl stumbled across a half dead Salamander. By the looks of it, it had been drenched in water. Axl picke dthe poor critter up and placed him on his shoulder, next to his spirit guide. As Axl continued the pursuit, the small salamnder begant to regain consciousness. Hours passed and the trail Axl had been following lead to a large lake. Steppng back a bit, suspecting a trap, he noticed the small salamander was now fully awake. It's eyes were fixated on a large group of bushes, Axl knew to trust the salamander's heat sensitive vision and knew the water bender was hiding there.
After apprehending the water bender. Axl claimed his bounty, and decided to keep the small salamnder, naming it Shouyou after his deceased father.
Abilities:
Heat sensitive vision: Able to pick up on a persons body temperature, even in the coldest environments.
Flame breath: Shouyou posesses the ability to breath fire, although not enough to kill anyone, it is useful in certain situations. Axl has used Shouyou for infiltrartion missions, utilizing his small size to get inside highly guarded areas, and fire breath for the destruction of government documents.
This could explain Axl's clean record, no criminal status despite several situations with numerous governments.
